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Snowfog is the perfect word and this poem is just all-around...December 27, 2020 - 8:50 am by Liz Garton Scanlon
So beautiful, Liz. Love the haiku and the sense of peace...December 26, 2020 - 11:36 am by Michelle Barnes
Beautiful, Liz, in every way.December 26, 2020 - 10:14 am by Laura Purdie Salas
This year I have wished for some blending of the before...December 26, 2020 - 8:37 am by Linda Baie
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I lovelovelove this! I’ve been able to swim laps this week at my hometown outdoor pool where I lifeguarded and taught lessons. You captured it PERFECTLY!!
Hi, Liz. This is such an attractive concept — how the water takes us in and then returns to itself when we leave. Beautiful final lines. You make me want to sit still in a pool on this hot day!
Really beautiful. I don’t have a handy pool now, but this brings back the days in an aunt’s pool, those lazy & heavenly days. I love ‘celebrate my crashing/Shatter into splashing”. Thank you!
Hi Liz. I really liked the lines “Paint me blue and lose me” and “Sit still.” Nicely turned phrases. -Ed
Love all the movement, both serene and energetic. such a lovely poem!
Love this! It’s perfect for all that I am feeling this weekend, and fun to boot! Thanks!
Lucky to have a pool in the back yard – I think I’ll go pay it a visit, thanks to your inspiring poem! Very nicely done. Happy Summering!