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Inside/Outside

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Inside, they faced off
like well-matched super heroes
landing blows
that shook the house
but did little
to slow one another.
Their words slammed
into walls, splintered
door ways, shattered
everything of value.
I took my china heart
and shut the door.
Outside, I climbed the oak
I was too old to climb.
I pressed my feet
against her solid trunk.
I grabbed her limbs
in my hands.
I pulled myself
into her lap.
I climbed higher
than I should.
I could hear the wind
singing to the birds.
I could hear the grass
whispering to the worms.
I could hear the leaves
breathe. I found
what I was looking for.
I tucked my stolen treasure
into a moss-lined nest
built by the earth.

© Elizabeth Steinglass, 2014, all rights reserved

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4 replies
  1. Rosi Hollinbeck
    Rosi Hollinbeck says:
    April 21, 2014 at 9:56 pm

    Oh, my. This is an amazing poem. A lot of kids will be connecting to this. Thanks for sharing it.

    Reply
  2. Victoria Richardson Warneck
    Victoria Richardson Warneck says:
    April 21, 2014 at 10:31 pm

    Startling and beautiful. And, oh, these lines!

    I could hear the grass
    whispering to the worms.
    I could hear the leaves
    breathe.

    I might need a tree to climb into…

    Reply
  3. Catherine Johnson
    Catherine Johnson says:
    April 22, 2014 at 10:50 am

    Love this!

    Reply
  4. Bridget Magee
    Bridget Magee says:
    May 2, 2014 at 2:14 pm

    I got goosebumps from this, Liz! The contrast from the violent beginning to the tranquil end is brilliant. Love these lines:
    “I pulled myself
    into her lap.”
    Oh the comfort of an old oak. =)

    Reply

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