flaking gray-green paint
lichen creeps across granite
I clamber the hills
© 2011 Elizabeth Ehrenfest Steinglass, all rights reserved
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I loved this hilarious twist at the end of your poem.October 28, 2019 - 8:28 pm by cheriee weichel
A fun poem - and a fantabulous pic to accompany it! A perfect...October 28, 2019 - 6:43 am by Kathryn Apel
Love your skimming ghost! And thanks for getting me to write...October 27, 2019 - 10:24 pm by Buffy Silverman
Fabulous response to this month's challenge. And you are...October 27, 2019 - 2:43 pm by Kay Jernigan McGriff
Is there anything more challenging than writing a haiku? There’s so much more to it than the syllables.
I liked it as soon as I read it. What do you think is the most difficult part?
For me the most difficult part is getting in two images (traditionally, one related to the season) that resonate with one another.
Here’s an incredible example by William Carlos Williams:
So different, this man
And this woman:
A stream flowing
In a field.