flaking gray-green paint
lichen creeps across granite
I clamber the hills
© 2011 Elizabeth Ehrenfest Steinglass, all rights reserved
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Just getting to reading last week's post, Liz. AND, I love...December 20, 2019 - 5:52 pm by Buffy Silverman
And is a wonderful word AND I really enjoyed your poem about...December 15, 2019 - 3:46 pm by Susan Bruck
AND this poem is brilliant, as are YOU, Liz!December 15, 2019 - 12:08 pm by Bridget Magee
Thanks, Mary Lee, what a lovely way to put it.December 15, 2019 - 8:42 am by Liz
Is there anything more challenging than writing a haiku? There’s so much more to it than the syllables.
I liked it as soon as I read it. What do you think is the most difficult part?
For me the most difficult part is getting in two images (traditionally, one related to the season) that resonate with one another.
Here’s an incredible example by William Carlos Williams:
So different, this man
And this woman:
A stream flowing
In a field.