City Life
Today I have one for the kids and one for the grown ups.
city life
the birds take a bath
in the gutter
Wall Street
the birds take a bath
in the gutter
© Elizabeth Steinglass, 2014, all rights reserved
Today I have one for the kids and one for the grown ups.
city life
the birds take a bath
in the gutter
Wall Street
the birds take a bath
in the gutter
© Elizabeth Steinglass, 2014, all rights reserved
Brilliant!
Thanks, Catherine!
Love the duality of the structure of the poem. With only one line change you’ve created a profound poem for two audiences. Amazing economy of words. = )