Fog

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Fog

As I sit down to write,
a cat creeps in
and sits on my head.
She circles once,
before settling
on the hummock
of my brain,
tucks her head
beneath her feet
and purrs herself
to sleep.
I can’t think of anything
but fur.

 

Buffy Silverman and I are doing a month-long poetry swap. Every day we exchange poems and critiques. The accountability makes the process very motivating, as do the friendly and helpful replies. I feel very lucky to have such a wonderful partner. On the first day of the month, Buffy sent me a poem about fog (inspired by her gorgeous photographs) with the preface that she wished she’d written Carl Sandburg’s poem. Don’t we all? I thought, and how brave she is to write about fog when every time anyone sits down to write about it, that damn cat shows up and blocks the view. Did I mention that the swap is also inspirational?

Next Friday I’ll be at the SCBWI Conference in NYC. Will any of you be there too?

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All the best,

Liz

22 replies
  1. Michelle Heidenrich Barnes says:

    Aha! So that’s why I couldn’t write that poem I wanted to earlier this week. It’s true. I also attempted to write a fog poem this week– I must have been tuned into you and Buffy somehow. Well done reining in that darn cat– she seems content, even if you do have a head full of fur to show for it. (Much better than my blank page.) Rock on, you two!

  2. Rosi Hollinbeck says:

    I really like your poem. It really put a smile on my face. Beautiful photo. Lovely poem. Great that you have a partner to work with on poetry. It is so good to have something like that to push the creative process.

  3. Bridget Magee says:

    You and Buffy are a partnership made in poetry heaven! I’ve never had good luck writing about fog – instead of thinking about fur, I end up think about cotton candy. (my mind always goes to food =)

    • Liz Steinglass says:

      I’d love to read a cotton candy poem. The first time I gave some to Amos he looked at me like what am I supposed to do with this?!

  4. Linda Baie says:

    I think Carl Sandburg would love what you said, and then what you wrote. He might even smile as I did, all that thinking about fur. I wish I could have done the poetry pairing, but decided to do Laura’s challenge instead. Daily writing is good for the soul, isn’t it, and response is great too. Have fun, Liz.

    • Liz Steinglass says:

      Thanks, Linda. Laura’s challenge looks wonderful. Maybe you could combine the two and share poems you write in response to Laura’s prompts? I like what you say on your blog, “Having a conversation is a good thing.”

  5. Robyn Hood Black says:

    Wonderful! (I feel like I’ve got a piece of cat fur in my mouth, which might actually be true.)
    And, I agree – you and Buffy as accountability partners is a formidable, oh-so-creative match-up.

  6. Tabatha says:

    I can see that cat so clearly, Liz. She’s making me sleepy too. I am thinking about writing a poem a day during March about historical women. All of you daily-writing PFers are inspiring!

  7. Carol says:

    I love the connection to Sandburg’s poem! I have been watching everyone write found poems every day this week. I wrote haiku with Mary Lee in December, and thought I might do found poems, but that cat keeps wrapping itself around my brain every day and nothing has gotten written this week at all! Darn!

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